找出下列句子的错误（英语）

Question

题目：A Map Look at the map on the wall. That's a world map. There are many countries in the world. This is my country--China. China is a big country. This is Dalian. Dalian is a beautiful city. I come from Dalian. Now I'm studying in Beijing. Beijing is China's capital. We love Beijing. We love China. We love our motherland. (如果没有错的话，就告诉我没有错误吧~~）

Answer 1

语法上是没有错哦。不过有第一句可以看出是站在地图前面介绍的吧。我觉得把“this is dalian”改用“here is dalian”也许会更好点哦。多试着用用连词也好的，比如and ,but ,这样感觉更好些哦。不过刚开始学很不错哦！

Answer 2

Look at the map on the wall. That's a world map. 感觉太罗嗦了……只是个人感觉哦，我觉得应该写成这样你看可以吗 Look, there's a world map on the wall.不知道你感觉怎么样呢…… 还有Beijing is China's capital应该改成Beijing is the capital of China本回答被提问者采纳