假如你是李华,你写了一个简短的英文小故事,想让你的美国外教mr.smith帮忙修改？

Question

写一篇80词左右的英语作文

Answer 1

英语作文：
Dear Mr Smith.
I wrote a short story in English. It is about a kid who is going to see his grandparents. It describes what happens on his way to his parents’ home.
I think there would be a few errors in the story.
I enclosed it in the email and hope you can read it through and correct those errors.
Many thanks,
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