第1个回答 2012-06-11
We all know that a year 【consists of four seasons:】spring, summer, autumn and winter. 【The season I like most】 is spring, because 【in spring】the sky is blue, the air is humid【, and】 breeze blows on 【去掉the】people, 【which makes】people feel happy. The most important point 【is that】【my favourite plant, cherry blossoms, are in full bloom in AprilI!】【There are sakura everywhere which】are beautiful, bright, 【and】charming. Walking in the cherry Road, 【we can see】 each 【去掉a】 sakura tree 【covered with】clusters of flowers, 【which are】pink or red, like a little girl with a tiara. 【If】 you like spring, please tell me.
第2个回答 2012-06-11
帮你修改了一下，希望能有帮助。
We all know that a year have four seasons that are spring, summer, autumn and winter .The season I like most is spring, because the sky is blue, the air is humid; breeze blows on the people,that can make people feel happy. The most important point is I most like the plant cherry is held in April! A group of Sakura is beautiful, bright and charming. Walking in the cherry road, each a Sakura tree hanging clusters of flowers, they are pink or red, like a little girl with a tiara. Do you like spring? Please tell me.本回答被提问者采纳
第3个回答 2012-06-11
第一句a year consists of .......four sensons
第二句the season I like most is spring
第三句the breeze blows people softly
第四句which can make people happy
第五局above all,the cherry,which I like most,is plant in April
第六局樱花这句去掉移到第八句
第七句walking on the cherry road
第八句each sakura tree is cover by clusters of beautiful charming flowers
第九局some of them are pink ,some are red,
最后一句this is my point of view do you like spring ........
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第4个回答 2012-06-11
语法有很多错的 单词没什么错…手机不好打 留给楼下解决
第5个回答 2012-06-11
we all know that there are four seasons in a year:spring, summer, autumn and winter .my favorite season is spring, because the sky is blue, the air is humid