求高手将下列化学摘要翻译成英语。要人工的。后面的是机译的。可以做参考。后面还有高分。

摘要:高吸油性树脂是一种低交联新型功能高分子材料,广泛应用于治理海洋石油泄漏造成的污染及其它油污染。与普通吸油材料相比,高吸油性树脂具有不可比拟的优越性。开发优质低价的高吸油性树脂是人类进军海洋石油开采的一项重要课题。介绍了高吸油性树脂的特点、发展现状、几项重要的性能指标和在国内外的应用情况,并展望了高吸油性树脂今后的研究方向。
High oil-absorbing resin application in environmental protection

Abstract: high oil-absorbing resin is a low crosslinking new functional polymer materials, widely used in governance Marine oil spill affect pollution and other oil pollution. Compared with ordinary oil-absorbing materials, high oil-absorbing resin has incomparable advantages. Develop high-quality low-cost high oil-absorbing resin is human foray into offshore oil drilling an important topic. Introduces the characteristics of high oil-absorbing resin development, the present situation, several important performance index and the application at home and abroad, and prospected high oil-absorbing resin research direction in the future.
Keywords: high oil-absorbing resin; Environmental protection; Functional polymer materials

基本上还行,就是有的词用的不准确。交联用cross-link 治理不能用governance用 to bring under control 普通的吸油材料是 tradition oil-absorbing用ordinary表达不是很好。incomparable一般不用在学术上,可以用highly代替。开发优质低价的高吸油性树脂是人类进军海洋石油开采的一项重要课题。这句话中文就有问题 ,应该是开采海洋石油。翻译的太ch-english了。意思想说,这个课题很重要可以写:To improve the quality and reduce the cost of the High oil-absorbing resin is important to extract crude oil in the sea.
"Introduces the characteristics of high oil-absorbing resin development, the present situation, several important performance index and the application at home and abroad, and prospected high oil-absorbing resin research direction in the future"这个话都没看到主语...
你可以写:This paper includes illustrations of the characteristics of high oil-absorbing resin development, the present situation, several important performance index and the application at home and abroad.最后你可以这么说Finally, The method of future work are summarized. (direction 一般是具体的不是抽象的)后面的改的比较多,电脑翻译的问题是在太多的我把整句给你改了。这个如果是本科毕设的摘要,可以放心了。应该没什么问题。 如果是硕士的,以后要多看点英文文献,好多话和我们日常的说法是不一样的。
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High oil-absorbing resin is a new low crosslinking functional polymer material,which is widely used in governancing the polution caused by ocean oil spill and other oil spill.Compare with common oil-absorbing,it has uncomparable advantages.Developing high oil-absorbing resin with high-quality low-cost is an important subject in human drilling for ocean oil.This report has introduced the characteristics ,development present situation,some important performance index and the domestic and foreign application of the high oil-absorbing resin,and looked at the prospect of researching it.
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