Love music, love basketball, love the internet, don't love online gaming, love knowledge, love learning about the world, love appreciating details in life. I'm not Vancl, I'm xxx from xxx. I've had many wishes, but right now my biggest wish is to pass the independent entrance exams. You might say I've got no chance, but I think I have what it takes. As Disraeli once said, “Diligence is the mother of good fortune.”
Your school ranks at the top in the field of electronics, providing the country with lots of skilled, talented people. I want to take this opportunity to realize my dream of studying at your school!
话说无论是college还是university,直接用school都是最好的。
参考资料:在美国上学,也曾成功申请学校