请求各位大侠给翻译一下!急!!!在线等!

各位老师:
我叫某某,1995年11月出生,是第九实验小学的六年级学生。小学期间我各门功课的成绩都保持优秀,连年被评为区级三好学生,今年还被评为市级三好学生。
我很喜欢英语,去年到美国加州参加中美少年儿童交流活动。一年纪开始,我就在英语学校学习英语,学习了初中英语,公共英语1级和2级的前半部分单元,六年级以来还接受每周一次的外教授课。除此外,我还跟妈妈学习法语。
在努力学习的同时,我还积极参加了一些社会实践活动。比如爱心捐献,资助贫困儿童,爱护环境,维护公共环境卫生,捡拾垃圾等活动,我还积极参加家长单位组织的植树活动。
性格方面,班主任老师评价认为,有上进心,聪明好学,喜欢读书,喜欢英语和奥数,有良好的学习习惯和行为习惯,团结同学,有良好的团队精神。
爱好有:游泳,跆拳道,绘画,书法,围棋等

就是以上这些,希望能翻的口语化一点,好的话我还给加分!!!

我教过小学英语,用短句来写可能比较合适。
Dear teachers :
我叫某某,1995年11月出生,是第九实验小学的六年级学生。小学期间我各门功课的成绩都保持优秀,连年被评为区级三好学生,今年还被评为市级三好学生。
My name is XX .I was born in November 1995.I’m from No.9 primary school. Now I’m in grade six. During the primary school,I was good at study and keep priority at each subject. I was awarded district level three good student for years. This year , I was awarded municipal level three good student .
我很喜欢英语,去年到美国加州参加中美少年儿童交流活动。一年级开始,我就在英语学校学习英语,学习了初中英语,公共英语1级和2级的前半部分单元,六年级以来还接受每周一次的外教授课。除此外,我还跟妈妈学习法语。
I like English very much. Last year, I went to California to join the Sino-American children exchange activities. From grade one, I learn English at English schools. At there, I have finished junior high school English learning, public English level 1 and the first half part of level 2. At grade six, I have foreign teacher’s class once a week. In addition,I learn French from my mother.
在努力学习的同时,我还积极参加了一些社会实践活动。比如爱心捐献,资助贫困儿童,爱护环境,维护公共环境卫生,捡拾垃圾等活动,我还积极参加家长单位组织的植树活动。
While I study very hard ,I take part in some social practice .Such as present love, provide money to poor children, protect the environment, safeguarding public health, pick up garbage, and so on. I also took an active part in planting activities at my parent’s work units.
性格方面,班主任老师评价认为,有上进心,聪明好学,喜欢读书,喜欢英语和奥数,有良好的学习习惯和行为习惯,团结同学,有良好的团队精神。
In my respects, my head master believed that I have got uplift, smart studious, like reading, like English and Olympic math, and a good learning habits and behavioural patterns, unite classmates, and a good team spirit.
爱好有:游泳,跆拳道,绘画,书法,围棋等
My hobby is : swimming, taekwondo, painting, calligraphy, Chinese chess, and so on.
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第1个回答  2006-05-02
Teachers :
My name is XX , was born in November 1995, nine pilot schools grade six students. During the primary door homework I have maintained excellent performance, several students as district three goods, this year students were awarded a municipal three goods.
I like English, California to participate in the U.S. last year to children exchange activities. One age, I learn English in English schools, a junior high school English learning, public English 1 level and the first part of two-class modules, six weekly Waijiao has also accepted teaching. Besides, I even told my mother to learn French.
In efforts to learn at the same time, I also actively participated in a number of social practice. For love contributions to finance poor children, for the environment, safeguarding public health, pick up garbage, and other activities, I also took an active part in the parents organized events.
Character, class teacher evaluation that is the urge for improvement, smart studious, like reading, like English and Aoshu, and a good learning habits and behavioural patterns, unite students, and a good team spirit.
Love : swimming, taekwondo, painting, calligraphy, Chinese chess, etc.
回答者:晗町 - 助理 三级 5-1 16:52

Fellow teachers:
I am ***, was born in November, 1995 , is the ninth Experimental Elementary School's sixth grade student. Elementary school period I various schoolwork result all maintains outstandingly, successive years is evaluated the area level healthy, studious, and helpful student, also is evaluated this year the city level healthy, studious, and helpful student.
I like English very much, participated Chinese-America children exchange last year to the American California. An age starts, I on in English school study English, have studied the junior middle school English, since the public English 1 level of and 2 level of front half minute unit, the sixth grade also has accepted once a week outside professor the class. Eliminates in addition, I also study French with mother.
While which studies diligently, I also positively participated in some social practice. For instance the compassion contribution, subsidizes the impoverished child, cherishes the environment, maintains the public environmental sanitation, picks ascends activity and so on trash, I also positively participate in the tree-planting activity which the guardian unit organizes.
The disposition aspect, teacher in charge teacher appraises believed that, has the desire to do better, intelligently is diligent, likes studying, likes English and the Austria number, has the good study custom and the behavior custom, the unity schoolmate, has the good team spirit.
The hobby includes: Swimming, Tae Kwon Do, drawing, calligraphy, Chinese chess and so on
回答者:Emmashao - 高级魔法师 七级 5-1 16:53

Teacher each:
I call so-and-so, be born November in 1995, is the grade six of the ninth experiment grade school the student.Period in grade school I the score of the each homework all keeps excellent, was for successive years been an area class by the 评 three good student, return this year the quilt 评 is municipal class three good student.
I like English very much, going to California, the United States to attend the Central America young child exchanges activity last year.A the age starts, I at English school study English, studied junior high school English, public English 1 class with 2 first half parts of units of classes, still accept since grade six once a week outside professor's lesson.Divided by in addition, I return to study that French is with mother.
At the diligent study of at the same time, I return positive attend some society practice activity.Love the heart alms for example, subsidize the poor child, take good care of environment, support the public environmental hygiene, collect garbage etc. activity, I return positive attend parent's unit organizes of plant trees the activity.
Personality aspect, form master teacher the evaluation thinks, having the ambition, the cleverness learns so much, liking to study, liking English with count, have the good study habit with behavior habit, incorporation classmate, have the good team spirit.
Love to have:Swimming, Tae Kwon Do, painting, calligraphy,"go" etc. uhogy
第2个回答  2006-05-01
Good Morning/Afternoon teachers:

My name is mo mo. I was born on the e.g. 17th of november, 1995. Currently i am a year 6, studying in 'the 9th shi yian school' in china. My academic is excellent, and few years in a row, i have being given an award for the brightest student in my town, this year i have also being given the award for the brightest student in my region.

I have a passion for english, last year i went to Califonia in USA in order to paticipate in an America-China student exchange. From my first year in school, i have studied english in an english school; i have studied intermediate english and the first half of the 1st and 2nd 'Public English' (a book). In my 6th year, i have also being given the chance to join a foreign language lesson, once every week. Furthermore, i have learnt french with my mum.
Apart from studying hard, i have also undertook many social activities for example charity jobs, helping needing children, taking care of the environment, protecting the public envionment, taking part in the 'trash pichkin' activity and i have enthusiastically signed up to the planting trees events in the parents society.
My form teacher described me as an 'enthusiastic student', clever and quick at learning , loves reading, have passion in english and brilliant at problem solving. Also i have a very good attitude to learning and good manners. I am excellent at group work and working with other students.

My hobbies include; swimming, tai kwon do, drawing, caligraphy and chess

我是在英国多书6年底学生,这个翻译虽然不是一个字对一个字,但是因该是很准确的,以上的几个答案,好像不符合英语语法,至少在英国的我觉得是这样的,不知道美国人会说什么
第3个回答  2006-05-02
Fellow teachers:
My name is XX , in November, 1995 to be born, was the ninth experimental elementary school's sixth grade students. Elementary school period I various schoolwork result all maintains outstandingly, successive years is evaluated the area level healthy, studious, and helpful student, also is evaluated this year the city level healthy, studious, and helpful student. I like English very much, participated in children exchange last year to the American California. An age starts, I on in English school study English, have studied the junior middle school English, since the public English 1 level of and 2 level of front half minute unit, the sixth grade also has accepted once a week outside professor the class. Eliminates in addition, I also study French with mother. While which studies diligently, I also positively participated in some social practice. For instance the compassion contribution, subsidizes the impoverished child, cherishes the environment, maintains the public environmental sanitation, picks ascends activity and so on trash, I also positively participate in the tree-planting activity which the guardian unit organizes. The disposition aspect, teacher in charge teacher appraises believed that, has the desire to do better, intelligently is diligent, likes studying, likes English and the Austria number, has the good study custom and the behavior custom, the unity schoolmate, has the good team spirit. The hobby includes: Swimming, Tae Kwon Do, drawing, calligraphy, Chinese chess and so on
第4个回答  2006-05-01
Honored teachers:
I'm **. I was born in Sptember 1995.I am in grade six. I come from NO. 9 Experimental Primary School.ALl my subjects are excellent as a pupil.I was dubbed "Three Goods" student in our district 3 years successively.I like English very much.I took part in a communicative activity between American and Chinese children in California last year.I began to learn English when in grade one.I have learned the junior middle school English courses, PETS-1,the former part of PETS-2 as well.It is the first time I attend a foreign teacher's course since I entered grade 6.Apart from this,I learn French from my mother.
Besides study,I take an active part in some social practice, such as: donating,funding poor children,protecting the environment,keeping public public places clean ,picking up rubbish and growing trees.I am considered aggressive ,hardworking ,smart and cooperative.I like reading and The Olympic Maths Games. I have formed good habits in learning and behavor.
Swimming,kickboxing,painting ,handwriting and the game of "go" are all among my hobbies.
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