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一篇英语作文,大家看一下有没有语法错误,还有就是有什么地方可以修改的,是一篇游记:(Nanbei Lake南北湖 Eagle Top鹰窟顶 Tanxian Stone Wall谈仙岭 Yunxiu Temple云岫庵)PS:文中打括号的是原来卷子上就有的,不用改

(Today we,Class3,Grade9 students,went to Nanbei Lake for an enjoyable travel.At 8:30 a.m. we met)at our school gate.Then we got there at 9:00a.m.
Nanbei Lake was really a beautiful place.The air was fresh and the water was clear.
We climbed a montain and then reached Eagle Top ,I looked down from the Eagle Top ,"what an amazing place "I thought.
Then ,we visited many other places of inerest.Such as Tanxian Stone Wall ,Yunxiu Temple and so on.
In the afternoon,I went boating,took some photos and picked some orange in the tree with my friends.
Finally,we went back at 4:15 p.m.
(It was really a wonderful trip.I will remember it forever.)

Answer 1

(Today we,Class3,Grade9 students,went to Nanbei Lake for an enjoyable travel.At 8:30 a.m. we met)at our school gate.Then we got there at 9:00a.m.
Nanbei Lake was really a beautiful place.The air was fresh and the water was clear.
We climbed a mountain and then reached Eagle Top ,I looked down from the Eagle Top ,"what an amazing place "I thought.
Then ,we visited many other places of inerest, such as Tanxian Stone Wall ,Yunxiu Temple and so on.
In the afternoon,I went boating,took some photos and picked some orange in the tree with my friends.
Finally,we went back at 4:15 p.m.
(It was really a wonderful trip.I will remember it forever.)

montain--mountain(不知道现在是不是通写)
such要小写

初中作文的话这样应该不错了
开头最后一句这样感觉更顺一些：
We met at our school gate at 8:30 a.m. and got there at 9:00a.m.
第二句的时态用过去时……不太清楚合不合适……
因为Nanbei Lake 本身就是很美、空气清新，这可以算是客观事实吗？

Answer 2

我来一句一句的点一下，可能不是完全正确，不过可以参考一下。
Nanbei Lake was really a beautiful place.The air was fresh and the water was clear
was 如果改成is更能表达热爱之情
We climbed a ‘montain’ and then reached Eagle Top ,I looked down from the Eagle Top ,"what an amazing place "I thought.

In the afternoon,I went boating,took some photos and picked some orange in the tree with my friends.
I went boating不应该是we吗？in the tree 是在树上，而长在树上应用介词on

Answer 3

乍一看以为是天涯诶，盗版。。。

Answer 4

没看明白是什么

Answer 5

奥鹏远程教育啥的呀。。。
偶点进去看啦。。。:82yo:

Answer 6

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