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Question

老师，祝福您五一节快乐
My dear teacher，happy may 1 festival

还没到呢！
It isn’t arrive the holiday

放假干什么？
What do you plan to do in the holiday？

嘿嘿，提前祝了
Giving my wishes in advance

我想去学校好好看书
I would like to go to the school and have a good reading .

暂时这么定的
Just scheduled

倒是孜孜以求
so study hard

嘿嘿，谢谢老师的夸奖
Thank you for your words of praise

老师呢？五一打算做什么
And you ?what’s teacher’s schedule?

一如既往。
As usual

老师才是孜孜以求呢
How our teacher diligent is.

老师，如果您不忙，咱们刚才这段对话怎样翻译成英文呢
Mr.zhang if you have time ,can you tell me that how our dialogue just now are translate into english.

你试一试。
Try it on you own

Answer 1

老师，祝福您五一节快乐。
My dear teacher, happy May Day.

还没到呢！
It dosen't come around!

放假干什么？
What are you going to do in the holiday?/What are you doing in holiday?
口语中，对于即将发生的事情，可用现在进行时代替将来时。

嘿嘿，提前祝了！
Just early wishes!

我想去学校好好看书。
I wanna do reading in school./I'd like to go to school for reading.

暂时这么定的。
That's just my plan now./That's just what I've planned.

倒是孜孜以求。
You put yourself into it, so to speak.
超级句型：so to speak：真可谓，真算的上是

嘿嘿，谢谢老师的夸奖。
Thanks for your commending.

老师呢？五一打算做什么？
And Sir/Madam, how is your holiday going?
超级句型：how is sth going?通常用于询问近况。
如：How is your business going?进来生意怎么样？

一如既往。
Some as usual/always.

老师才是孜孜以求呢。
Sir/Madam, you are the one who seeks for it.

老师，如果您不忙，咱们刚才这段对话怎样翻译成英文呢。
Sir/Madam, would you please help me interpret that dialog we talked if you have time/are not busy.
词义差别：interpret/interpretation：口译；translate/translation：笔译

你试一试。
Just have a try.

嘿嘿，，是我哦，#^_^#
口语中大可不必追求语法，意思简单明确就好了，也不必去找那些跟意思一一对应的词汇来翻译，完全可以用简单的词汇和句型来代替~

Answer 2

老师，祝福您五一节快乐
My dear teacher，happy Labor's Day (劳动节）

还没到呢！
The holiday hasn't arrived yet.

放假干什么？
What are you planning to do during your vacation？

嘿嘿，提前祝了
Oh well, it's never too early to wish you a happy holiday.

我想去学校好好看书
I would like to go to the school and take some time to read

暂时这么定的
That's my plan for now.

倒是孜孜以求
Not bad, you are a very diligent student

嘿嘿，谢谢老师的夸奖
Thank you so much.....

老师呢？五一打算做什么
And you ? What are you planning to do.

一如既往。
As usual

老师才是孜孜以求呢
You are the diligent one, if I may.

老师，如果您不忙，咱们刚才这段对话怎样翻译成英文呢
Mr.zhang would you please translate the conversation we just had into english please, if you have time, that is...
你试一试。
Try it on your own

Answer 3

老师，祝福您五一节快乐
Dear teacher，happy May Day!
还没到呢！
It is only drawing near.(反向翻译：还正在临近着呢)
放假干什么？
What do you plan to do on the holiday？（假日前用 on）
嘿嘿，提前祝了
Giving my best wishes in advance.
我想去学校好好看书
I would like to be back to the college and do some reading whole heartedly.
暂时这么定的
Just a schedule.
倒是孜孜以求
You are hardworking, aren't you?
嘿嘿，谢谢老师的夸奖
Thank you for your praise/commend/compliment.
老师呢？五一打算做什么
And you ? What are you going to do on the day?
一如既往。
As usual / true to form.
老师才是孜孜以求呢
Your are really true to form, Sir.
老师，如果您不忙，咱们刚才这段对话怎样翻译成英文呢
Mr. Zhang, if you have time, will you please tell me how to translate the dialogue between us just now into English?
你试一试。
Might as well you try it on your own.

Answer 4

老师，祝福您五一节快乐
Dear teacher，happy May Day.

不要加my， 还有五一劳动节的固定用法是May Day。

还没到呢！
It isn’t even near.

放假干什么？
What's your plan for the holiday?

plan在这是名词，句式要简洁。

嘿嘿，提前祝了
不用强调出提前这个词，地道的说法是没有提前这么说的。

我想去学校好好看书
I would like to go to the school and read hard.

暂时这么定的
Just plan for now.

倒是孜孜以求
You're a hardworking student.
嘿嘿，谢谢老师的夸奖
Thank you for compliment.

老师呢？五一打算做什么
And what about you? what’s your schedule?

一如既往。
As usual.

老师才是孜孜以求呢
You are the one who works hard.

老师，如果您不忙，咱们刚才这段对话怎样翻译成英文呢
would you please help me translate our conversation into english if you have time, sir?

你试一试。
Just give a shot.

Give a shot : 尽管一试，最地道的说法。