How can we be happier?
No one can be happy all the time.It's noemal to feel sad.But if we are unhappy for a long time,it will be bad for our healthy.So how can we be happier?
First,say thanks to others.Say thanks to your mother and father,your teachers and friends.They were all help you before.
Second,help others.You can try your best to help others.When you see their smiling faces,you will be happier.
Last,have a strong body.It's very important for us.It is ont only make us happier but also make the people around us happier,too.We should do sports often,for example,swimming,go hiking,play football and so on.
We should stay in a good mood,it makes us healthier。And it makes our parents happier,too.
正文第四段第二句话 “It is ont......"改为”It is not“
初二。有什么意见?谢谢!
追答这个文章中有很多地方都很生硬,处理得不够圆滑,有时用词也不够准确。但是初二应该都差不多,自己多看看书吧,看看英文文章。
追问这篇作文如果考试会不会丢分呢
追答这个肯定是会的,你最好问一下老师你们当地的评分标准。
那么亲 听你的改完这些句子,考试的话应该不会丢分了吧?