写一篇英语小短文

我们外出或旅游的时候,可以乘坐飞机,火车或轮船。请你写一篇70词左右的短文,对以上几种出行方式谈谈自己的看法。

Nowadays, we can go on a trip by airplane, train or ship. I used to take airplanes to go around, because they were fast, which saved me lots of time to enjoy the trip. But, now, I take more trains. Why do I change? Because the planes are not on time any more. They may delay for hours for no reason. And, the service is going down. The trains have increased their speed. And, they are on time usually. Also, there are more trains each day.In addition, we do not have to go through the security check like airplanes. As for ships, I prefer cruises. They have rooms, food and entertainment on the ship. You can swim, play table tennis, sing songs, and watch shows there. But if it is a business trip, I will not take a ship, because it is too slow.
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第1个回答  2012-07-30
Different ways of travelling
As is known to all, airplanes, trains and ships are common vehicles for travelling.The following are some of my views.
There are many advantages for travelling by plane.For instance,it is so fast that you only spend couple of hours travelling to the other side of the world.
I prefer to travel by train.Because I can appreciate the scenery along the trip.Although it costs me longer time to reach the destination, I think it's worthy.
Sometimes we also travel by ship.As I'm always sick on the ship, I'd rather not choose ships even if it's a good chance to feel the sea wind.

In my hunble opinion, 楼上写得很好,但不适合应试,阅卷老师不能很快找到给分点。
第2个回答  2012-07-19
很简单呀,把题干叙述一下,再稍微加点东西
第3个回答  2012-08-02
你是不是不会用英语写作文?
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