我这里有篇英语作文想要大家帮忙修改一下 真的谢谢 谢谢大家点进来 我急需大家对我的帮助 麻烦各位了

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我这里有篇英语作文想要大家帮忙修改一下 真的谢谢 谢谢大家点进来 我急需大家对我的帮助 麻烦各位了
Dear friends,
On behalf of the Students' Union, I would like to extend our warmest welcome to you.
To begin with, the new language environment is differences from your country,I hope you can be little by little suit them,you can communion with me or your classmates, I think that it can make you suit faster.Meanwhile,our university library open time and rule are differences from your university,you should ask we university teachers. I think these suggestions can helped you suit new environment faster and be more enjoy new campus life.
Your consideration of my suggestions would be much appreciated.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

Answer 1

differences都改成different
communion改成communicate
i think that后面那个it去了
ask us改成ask our
library加's
role改成roles
can helped改成can help
be more enjoy加ed
还有最后一段感觉很奇怪…暂时这些追答

extend改成express吧

you can be little by little suit them改成you can suit them little by little

meanwhile个人感觉可以改成otherwise

you should ask 改成you need ask

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