这样翻译合适么？第2段。谢谢！~

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这样翻译行么？或者有更简单的么？考试用。谢谢！~
那位老师讲课时，同学们都一边细心地倾听，一边认真地做笔记。
Teacher who lectures, the students are listening carefully to the side, it is necessary to take notes.
我们钦佩伟人，因为他们的所作所为值得我们敬佩。
We admire great man, because what they do deserve our admiration.
四个学生共住在一个套间，套间内有他们公共的厨房、厕所和卫生间。
Four students were living in a suite, and the suites have their public kitchens, toilets and bathrooms.
那些美国人对中国文化非常好奇，很想了解中美文化的主要差异。
Americans are very curious about the Chinese culture, and want to understand the main differences between the United States culture.
那些英国学生非常喜欢去年在中国度过的暑假，主要原因是他们结交了许多中国朋友。
Very much like those British students in China last year through the summer, mainly because they make a lot of Chinese friends.
他们急切要知道是否可以在这个房间里过夜。
They are in urgent need to know whether it is possible in this room overnight.
老师说话听起来好像感冒了，或者咳嗽。
Teachers say sounds like a cold or cough.
在很长一段时间里，我们国家有许多人相信13这个数字会带来厄运。
In a very long time, we believe that there are many countries this figure 13 will bring misfortune.
他是一个勤奋的学生，学过的每一篇课文都能背诵。
He was a diligent student, school texts for each one can recite.
自从王教授从以前的住处搬走以后，我一直没看见过他。
Since Professor Wang removed from the former residence after I had never seen him.
她在英语演讲中得了一等奖，感到非常兴奋。
She had won English speech, was very excited.
那个小男孩发觉自己很难适应新学校的环境。
The little boy found it hard to adapt to the new school environment.
他对这里的一切都很满意，从不抱怨任何事情。
He satisfied everything is here, and never complained about anything.
如果我能通过学校的考试，心里就会充溢着这样一种感觉：我很快就会变得完美无暇。
If I pass the exam schools, and my heart will was imbued with such a feeling: I will soon become immaculate.
有些父母选购神童故事给孩子看，希望孩子将来有一天会出人头地。
Some parents buy child prodigy story to the children, the hope that his children would one day be notoriety.
一个人一生中最美好、最幸福的重大事件之一发生在举行婚礼的那天。
One's life in the most beautiful, the most happiness in one of the major events of the wedding day.
她的母亲辛辛苦苦的缝制棉织品。
Her mother worked hard to make the cotton fabric.
许多人为准备婚礼而花费很多时间和金钱。
Many people spend a lot of preparations for the wedding of time and money.
过去，姑娘出嫁时要带许多东西到丈夫家去，包括被褥、床单、大衣橱等
The past, when an unmarried girl with many things to her husband's home, including blankets, sheets, such as a closet.
男女订婚一年后举行婚礼，这是一种传统习俗。
Men and women engaged held one year after the wedding, which is a traditional practices.

Answer 1

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那位老师讲课时，同学们都一边细心地倾听，一边认真地做笔记。
When that teacher teaching, schoolmates all one side carefully listen attentively, at the same
time earnestly makes the note.

我们钦佩伟人，因为他们的所作所为值得我们敬佩。
We admire the extraordinary personality, because their actions are worth us admiring.

四个学生共住在一个套间，套间内有他们公共的厨房、厕所和卫生间。
Four students altogether live in an apartment, in the apartment have their public kitchen, the restroom and the bathroom.

那些美国人对中国文化非常好奇，很想了解中美文化的主要差异。
These Americans are extremely curious to the Chinese culture, very wants to understand the Chinese and American culture the main difference.

他们急切要知道是否可以在这个房间里过夜。
They anxious must know whether can pass the night in this room.

老师说话听起来好像感冒了，或者咳嗽。
Teacher spoke sounds probably to catch cold, or cough.

在很长一段时间里，我们国家有许多人相信13这个数字会带来厄运。
In very long period of time, our country has many people to believe 13 this numerals can bring the misfortune.

他是一个勤奋的学生，学过的每一篇课文都能背诵。
He is a diligent student, has studied each text all can recite.

自从王教授从以前的住处搬走以后，我一直没看见过他。
Moves out after since Professor Wang from beforehand dwelling, I have not seen him.

她在英语演讲中得了一等奖，感到非常兴奋。
She in English lecture the first award, has felt extremely excitedly.

那个小男孩发觉自己很难适应新学校的环境。
That young boy detected oneself very difficult to adapt to the new school circumstances.

他对这里的一切都很满意，从不抱怨任何事情。
He very is satisfied to here all, ever does not complain anything.

如果我能通过学校的考试，心里就会充溢着这样一种感觉：我很快就会变得完美无暇。
If I can through the school test, in the heart be able the full this kind of kind of feeling: I very quick can become perfectly have no time.

有些父母选购神童故事给孩子看，希望孩子将来有一天会出人头地。
Some parents select and purchase the child prodigy the story to look to the child that, hoped the child future one day to be able to become outstanding.

一个人一生中最美好、最幸福的重大事件之一发生在举行婚礼的那天。
In a person life is happiest, one of happiest significant events occurs at hold wedding ceremony that day.

她的母亲辛辛苦苦的缝制棉织品。
Her mother laborious sews the cotton fabric.

许多人为准备婚礼而花费很多时间和金钱。
Many people spend the very much time and the money for the preparation wedding ceremony.

过去，姑娘出嫁时要带许多东西到丈夫家去，包括被褥、床单、大衣橱等。
In the past, the girl got married when had to bring many things to go to the husband family, including bedding, bed sheet, big wardrobe and so on.

男女订婚一年后举行婚礼，这是一种传统习俗。
After the men and women become engaged for a year to hold the wedding ceremony, this is one traditional custom.

Answer 2

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Answer 3

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