一边译这段话，一边被它所打动。相信我的英文除完全正确、漂亮之外，也一样能打动各位评委。请好好学习、理解并背下来，对你定会大有帮助。通过了，可别忘了通知我并加分哟！
Dear judges,
I am XXX. Today I am standing here both timid and brave. Compared with the qualities required for the XXX profession, my spoken English is not good enough. That's why I am timid, but I have the courage to overcome it. My classmates describe me as the Eager Beaver, the Iron Man and the Black Horse. As secretary of the Youth League, I won for my class, with my zealous efforts, the honour of a Youth League Branch with Five Distinctions in the Province. With one year's effort, I got enrolled by the provincial demonstration school and, within half a year, I moved up from the second-tier university level to a steady score at the first-tier university level.
All these experiences taught me that one must seek steadiness in life and appreciate the collective power. I also learned how to cherish what I have. On my future path, I will also been regarded by teachers as a highly diligent girl for I know that God rewards those who work the hardest. Today, I have chosen to stand here when I know fully well that my spoken English is not outstanding. This is because I want to seek an opportunity--an opportunity that will allow me to enter the university I've been dreaming about, an opportunity that will allow me to strive again for my goal.
追问刚才关于那个面试示弱的求助收到了吗？还有额，外国人会喜欢那种一直当班长的人吗？下面是翻译的句子：
6年团支书，7年班长的生涯，不仅让我学会了怎样与人交流，更重要的是深刻的理解了“团结力量大”的含义。
追答对不起，刚收到你新加的句子。国外很希望领导能力强，愿意奉献的人。
My experience as Youth League secretary for six years and class monitor for seven years has not only taught me how to handle inter-personal skills but, more importantly, enabled me to understand in great depths the maxim, "Strength comes from unity."
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